I think Sara did a good job. She had a couple off task moments but still did a good job giving a a summary. She gave a lot of information without giving to much information out. She always had eye contact with the camera and did not use her note card a lot. Good Job.
SAWA! :) I think from me filming this show and listening to it like 7 times really got me interested in your book! She gave many great details to the audience without ruining the novel. Miss. Crevar did a swell job by keeping on topic and making lots of eye contact just as Jay had said. Sorry i did not zoom because i did not know how. Anyways by you talking about this book had really considered reading it!
Sara-- I think you did a good job speaking to the camera with good eye contact and speaking clearly. You persuade me well not to read it because It always helps to have a lot of dialogue and I think a lot of description would be confusing, also. Thanks for the head's up. --Kati!!
Sara Crevar you did a great job with your voice. But i would work on making more eye contact with the camera instead of at your note card. But you did an amazing job explain the plot of the story and i liked how you pointed out the good and bad things you saw in the book. GOOD DANDY JOB SARA!
Good Job Sara!! You spoke loud and clearly through the book talk. You also kept good eye contact and didn’t look at the note cards a lot. Your summary of the novel sounded very organized. You sounded very prepared and gave great details. This book sounds very fascinating and I think I’ll have to read it next. : )
thanks for the tip on not reading this book. At first ypu described the story very well leaving lots of details there for the listener including the one about how it took place in Ohio. It caught my ear immidatley and wanted to know more. You had great eye contact and awesome speaking. You didnt mummble once!I also liked the backround. It was a real thought out presentation and you would get an A+ if it was up to me!
I think Sara did very on her video. I think she did a great job using her notecard, but making good eye contact at the same time. The backround where your standing makes it even better. I would work on making me more interested with different facts but i liked how you gave a lot of information and explained why you did not like the book. I think Sara did a great job! (:
I think Sara did a good job. She had a couple off task moments but still did a good job giving a a summary. She gave a lot of information without giving to much information out. She always had eye contact with the camera and did not use her note card a lot. Good Job.
ReplyDeleteSAWA! :) I think from me filming this show and listening to it like 7 times really got me interested in your book! She gave many great details to the audience without ruining the novel. Miss. Crevar did a swell job by keeping on topic and making lots of eye contact just as Jay had said. Sorry i did not zoom because i did not know how. Anyways by you talking about this book had really considered reading it!
ReplyDeleteKEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
Sara--
ReplyDeleteI think you did a good job speaking to the camera with good eye contact and speaking clearly. You persuade me well not to read it because It always helps to have a lot of dialogue and I think a lot of description would be confusing, also. Thanks for the head's up.
--Kati!!
Sara Crevar you did a great job with your voice. But i would work on making more eye contact with the camera instead of at your note card. But you did an amazing job explain the plot of the story and i liked how you pointed out the good and bad things you saw in the book. GOOD DANDY JOB SARA!
ReplyDeleteGood Job Sara!! You spoke loud and clearly through the book talk. You also kept good eye contact and didn’t look at the note cards a lot. Your summary of the novel sounded very organized. You sounded very prepared and gave great details. This book sounds very fascinating and I think I’ll have to read it next. : )
ReplyDeletethanks for the tip on not reading this book. At first ypu described the story very well leaving lots of details there for the listener including the one about how it took place in Ohio. It caught my ear immidatley and wanted to know more. You had great eye contact and awesome speaking. You didnt mummble once!I also liked the backround. It was a real thought out presentation and you would get an A+ if it was up to me!
ReplyDeleteI think Sara did very on her video. I think she did a great job using her notecard, but making good eye contact at the same time. The backround where your standing makes it even better. I would work on making me more interested with different facts but i liked how you gave a lot of information and explained why you did not like the book. I think Sara did a great job! (:
ReplyDeletevery good* typo !
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