first of all, you di a little to much refering to your not card. But, your presentation was still very good and was a good time length. It sounds pretty intresting because you said there is a lot of action. that is good. Also, it sounds like a good read so maybe ill consider it.
Overall, you did a good job. Your eye contact was good and you gave a good summary. I liked how you also said you didn't like the book. I would have to agree with you and not give this one a try.
I think you did a good job with your preseantion. I liked the fact that your were honest and said that you didn't like the book. I trust your recommendation and i won't read the book. - Danny Glassman on Miss Duffy's username
You did a good job. You could have looked less at the notecard, but your words were loud and clear, and you gave a good summary on the book. I think I'll do the smart thing and not read the book, just as you suggeted.
i think you did a good job. But i think you should have made more ey contact with the camera. also, it was coool how you were being honest saying you didn't like the book.
I think that you could have chose a better spot becasue it was hard to hear you with the background noise. You did have goood eye contact though. You gave good reason's towards why I shouldn't read the book, so I don't think I would read it. I don't like reading old literature becasue of the writing style.
Nice job Ben. you did a great job explaining the plot and setting of the book. You did a fantastic job with your voice. I think I might read Frankenstein because of this review.
Nice work ben davis! I liked your summaray, and it made the book sound very interesting to me. I liked how you said you dont reccomend this book, because most people just say they would recomend books even if the didnt like it. Your eye contact and such great. Good job!
Good job Ben. The summary was well-done. You looked at your notecard the whole time though. I probably would take your advice. Older writing styles can be difficult to follow.
you looked too much at your note card. i did like the presentation. i liked how you told people not to read this book. You gave some pretty good reasons about why not to read this book.
Very well done ben, besides looking at your notcard alot, lol. Looking at it limited your eye contact and voice projection, but you still did extremely well. I thought it was funny that you looked at your notecard when you told the camera your name! (haha) Also, for telling the truth about others reading the book. Good Job overall!
first of all, you di a little to much refering to your not card. But, your presentation was still very good and was a good time length. It sounds pretty intresting because you said there is a lot of action. that is good. Also, it sounds like a good read so maybe ill consider it.
ReplyDeleteOverall, you did a good job. Your eye contact was good and you gave a good summary. I liked how you also said you didn't like the book. I would have to agree with you and not give this one a try.
ReplyDeleteI think you did a good job with your preseantion. I liked the fact that your were honest and said that you didn't like the book. I trust your recommendation and i won't read the book. - Danny Glassman on Miss Duffy's username
ReplyDeleteYou did a good job. You could have looked less at the notecard, but your words were loud and clear, and you gave a good summary on the book. I think I'll do the smart thing and not read the book, just as you suggeted.
ReplyDeletei think you did a good job. But i think you should have made more ey contact with the camera. also, it was coool how you were being honest saying you didn't like the book.
ReplyDeleteI think that you could have chose a better spot becasue it was hard to hear you with the background noise. You did have goood eye contact though. You gave good reason's towards why I shouldn't read the book, so I don't think I would read it. I don't like reading old literature becasue of the writing style.
ReplyDeleteNice job Ben. you did a great job explaining the plot and setting of the book. You did a fantastic job with your voice. I think I might read Frankenstein because of this review.
ReplyDeleteNice work ben davis! I liked your summaray, and it made the book sound very interesting to me. I liked how you said you dont reccomend this book, because most people just say they would recomend books even if the didnt like it. Your eye contact and such great. Good job!
ReplyDeleteGood job Ben. The summary was well-done. You looked at your notecard the whole time though. I probably would take your advice. Older writing styles can be difficult to follow.
ReplyDeleteyou looked too much at your note card. i did like the presentation. i liked how you told people not to read this book. You gave some pretty good reasons about why not to read this book.
ReplyDeleteVery well done ben, besides looking at your notcard alot, lol. Looking at it limited your eye contact and voice projection, but you still did extremely well. I thought it was funny that you looked at your notecard when you told the camera your name! (haha) Also, for telling the truth about others reading the book.
ReplyDeleteGood Job overall!