Friday, January 23, 2009

Lord of the Flies

9 comments:

  1. You did a great job on presenting your book. In my opinion you need to annunciate your words more.

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  2. you did a great job describing your book. i liked how you described the main characters. i might conceder reading it for my next reading book.

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  3. Marvin did a great job. I like how he told about the protagonist and antagonist. Also it gave a short summary of the book. This was good. Finally i like how he was honest and told that the dialogue was confusing.

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  4. You did a nice job with your book talk. You summarized the plot well and you made each part very clear. The description of the main characters was also a nice add.

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  5. You did a good job with your book talk. In my opinion, you were a bit unclear with your words. However, the book sounded really good and seems like a good book to read. How you added the characters description was a nice touch as well.

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  6. i thought it was good. it would have been if you added a little emotion i thought it was pretty dull. i thought you did a good job describing the book. and i think the book sounds pretty good

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  7. You did a good job presenting your book. Some parts were a little hard to understand but it was still good. The book sounded like a good book to read.

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  8. This book sounds pretty good. You stumbled over a few words though. I liked how you described the main character well. sounds like a good book. i think i might read it next semester.

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  9. Nice job Marvin. You made the book sound interesting! You do need to annunciate better though, but otherwise you had great eye contact! This book sounds pretty exciting!

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