you did a nice job. it sounded like a good book and it was, but if i didnt read the book, i would've read it. but next time you should try to speak up. but it was clear just hard to hear.
i think that you had very good eye contact and connection to the came like with the "quotes" you used with your fingers. the book shounds intersting but i dont think i would read it. it kind of sounds more like a guy book to me. -this is nikki buzalka by the way
You were okay with your book talk. You should have spoken louder and been more enthusiastic. Either way, it sounded interesting, especially when he shot at nothing when terrified. It was a good talk and I may read it as my next choice.
Hey Johnno good job on your video. One critic is to speak more clearly on your video. Also to look at the camera more. Overall a very good job. I really would like to read this book. I love war stories and havent been able to read many about the civil war. thanks for helping my choice on my book.
You had very good eye contact but needed to sound your words out better. The book sounded interesting to me the way you exlained it. Even with distractions you were able to focus and get the job done. Great job.
you did a nice job. it sounded like a good book and it was, but if i didnt read the book, i would've read it. but next time you should try to speak up. but it was clear just hard to hear.
ReplyDeletenice job jonno. u did a good job of explaining the book and made it sound interesting. but u had a monotone voice. nice job though
ReplyDeletei think that you had very good eye contact and connection to the came like with the "quotes" you used with your fingers. the book shounds intersting but i dont think i would read it. it kind of sounds more like a guy book to me.
ReplyDelete-this is nikki buzalka by the way
You were okay with your book talk. You should have spoken louder and been more enthusiastic. Either way, it sounded interesting, especially when he shot at nothing when terrified. It was a good talk and I may read it as my next choice.
ReplyDeleteHey Johnno good job on your video. One critic is to speak more clearly on your video. Also to look at the camera more. Overall a very good job. I really would like to read this book. I love war stories and havent been able to read many about the civil war. thanks for helping my choice on my book.
ReplyDeleteYou had very good eye contact but needed to sound your words out better. The book sounded interesting to me the way you exlained it. Even with distractions you were able to focus and get the job done. Great job.
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