I watched the video of Mckenzies video of The Great Gatsby. The sound was silent and hard to hear, however, Mckenzie looked at the camera frequently. I liked her description of the story; but it seemed like she gave away the ending. The story seemed like it was worth reading. -Kelley
i watched Mckenzie's video The Great Gatsby it sounded intriguing. I really liked how you told the plot without giving away the end. However, i think that you could've enounciated better and i couldnt really understand.
This was a good book talk. you were kind of hard to hear. You had good eye contact. you gave a good description of the plot. the book sounds pretty good.
Very nice. You have a good oratory and your words definitely carried over to the audience. The only thing I would have to say is don't put any spoilers in the summary. You could lose potential readers who don't want to read a book that they know the ending to. Still, I think I would give The Great Gatsby a try.
I watched the video of Mckenzies video of The Great Gatsby. The sound was silent and hard to hear, however, Mckenzie looked at the camera frequently. I liked her description of the story; but it seemed like she gave away the ending. The story seemed like it was worth reading. -Kelley
ReplyDeletei watched Mckenzie's video The Great Gatsby it sounded intriguing. I really liked how you told the plot without giving away the end. However, i think that you could've enounciated better and i couldnt really understand.
ReplyDeleteThis was a good book talk. you were kind of hard to hear. You had good eye contact. you gave a good description of the plot. the book sounds pretty good.
ReplyDeleteVery nice. You have a good oratory and your words definitely carried over to the audience. The only thing I would have to say is don't put any spoilers in the summary. You could lose potential readers who don't want to read a book that they know the ending to. Still, I think I would give The Great Gatsby a try.
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