I watched Matt's video. He laughs sometimes which distracts you from what he's actually trying to so. He says "uh" a lot which is also difficult. He did a good job looking up at the camera every once and a while though. The books sounds very good and you did a good explanation about it. Very good job sir.
I watched Matt Blatnicks video of Lord of Flies. He looked at his notecard most of the time and the filming distracted me because he would laugh when the camera got close to him. I wouldn't read this book because I don't like action and the story line seemed immature. -Kelley
The laughter during the video is distracting. Your presentation included all necessary requirements. I would consider reading the book. The plot sounds very original. Your inclusion of some events from the book was helpful to the persuasion.
i think he did a good job with this video. he explained everything very well. he laughed a couple of times which was a little distracting but other than that it was a good video. i also think the book sounded really interesting
i thought that you laughing was distracting. he did hit all the requirements. i liked how he said that some parts were suspenseful and some parts weren't. i might consider reading this book.
Your presentation was not the best altough you did describe the book well. There was too much laughter and not enough eye contact. I might consider reading this book because it sounds action filled and you made it sound like it had an interesting plot.
I watched Matt Blatnick's video, and i thought it was pretty good. But there was too much laughter. i also think he should of made bettter eye contact. He also made to book seem interesting.
I watched Matt's video. He laughs sometimes which distracts you from what he's actually trying to so. He says "uh" a lot which is also difficult. He did a good job looking up at the camera every once and a while though. The books sounds very good and you did a good explanation about it. Very good job sir.
ReplyDeleteI watched Matt Blatnicks video of Lord of Flies. He looked at his notecard most of the time and the filming distracted me because he would laugh when the camera got close to him. I wouldn't read this book because I don't like action and the story line seemed immature.
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The laughter during the video is distracting. Your presentation included all necessary requirements. I would consider reading the book. The plot sounds very original. Your inclusion of some events from the book was helpful to the persuasion.
ReplyDeletei think he did a good job with this video. he explained everything very well. he laughed a couple of times which was a little distracting but other than that it was a good video. i also think the book sounded really interesting
ReplyDeletei thought that you laughing was distracting. he did hit all the requirements. i liked how he said that some parts were suspenseful and some parts weren't. i might consider reading this book.
ReplyDeleteYour presentation was not the best altough you did describe the book well. There was too much laughter and not enough eye contact. I might consider reading this book because it sounds action filled and you made it sound like it had an interesting plot.
ReplyDeleteI watched Matt Blatnick's video, and i thought it was pretty good. But there was too much laughter. i also think he should of made bettter eye contact. He also made to book seem interesting.
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